"Hi Gerald,
You’ve proven yourself to be dedicated and disciplined throughout the duration of the
course. Also your respect for language in terms of clarity and structure and all its various possibilities
is solid. You are able to put forward your ideas in a convincing manner-with authenticity and a
confidence that inspires.
I sincerely hope that you continue to grow and develop on your writing journey, keep
abreast of the marketplace – be able to identify an outlet for what it is and hopefully find one that
suits your work. Above all, read work you admire and that will nourish your own-
Best of luck Gerald, Eileen "